Jim Dunnigan writes like verbal diarrhea. He just spews out the thoughts he has without any organization. Anyone who's read one of his wargame rulebooks will know about his prose. He does it quickly and does not read it again after he's done. Errors of grammar are brain farts that should have been easily caught by the barest minimum of proofreading. This obviously doesn't occur.
The fact that it's free excuses nothing. Jim Dunnigan's writing needs an editor, plain and simple. Otherwise he simply will not be taken seriously. He has a lot of great ideas - which he is not sharing effectively.
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